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Friday 20 September 2013

Pitch Feedback


 This is the feedback I obtained from my fellow students on my powerpoint pitch.








Generally speaking, I am very pleased with my feedback. People seem to have got the overall idea of my piece and understood it easily. One piece of criticism I think to be very valid is to be careful that I don't make my piece too long. I am aiming on showing rather than telling with this film, and I am very conscious of the time restraints. I aim to overcome any time issues through careful planning and precise editing.

1 comment:

  1. You need to analyse the comments and feedback that you are given and explain if it has altered your plans at all for your own product. Are you please with your feedback? If so, why?

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